
Ready to finally [achieve desired future reality] in [timeframe]?
The [timeframe] [course / program] for [Ideal Person descriptor] to help you [achieve desired future reality] without the [something they don’t want].
You are [something that is outwardly obvious, something they are not afraid to show off or share] but on the inside [secret or concealed truth that deep down they know is the reality of their situation].
Everyday / every week / [time frequency that they experience this problem] you [experience this specific problem].
All these [list specific aspects of their situation] leave you feeling [how do they feel? what are they thinking or wondering?]

There’s nothing wrong with you or [something about them that they’ve been blaming for the problem (ie: I’m just “not disciplined” → There’s nothing wrong with you or how disciplined you are.)]
Before you start [blaming yourself / diving back into the hustle / buy another course / whatever it is they tend to do as a “quick fix” or band aid solution] let’s get something clear:
[A positive truth about them, or what they’ve accomplished, their situation, or what they long for. Think about what you would say to empower a client who was at the lowest of low points when talking with you].
You are [empower and build up in order to allow them to forgive and excuse themselves].
That [what they need] is the [Signature Framework (if you have one)] that forms the foundation of the [Offer Name / program / or, my coaching / work, or my brand]. Within the [Offer Name / Framework / brand], you will [what they will do when working with you] to [achieve desired future reality].
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The only [adjective] [program / course / coaching experience] for [Ideal Person descriptor] designed to help you [achieve desired future reality] without [hangup].
buy now!Go from [where they are now] to [desired future reality].
This is your opportunity to [achieve desired future reality] without [thing they do NOT want to do].
Yes, you really can stop [what they’ve been trying to do] and experience the [feeling, ie: peace of mind] that comes from [achieving desired future reality].
This is the same [system / approach / method / process] hundreds of [Ideal Person descriptor] like you have used to [achieve desired future reality].
i'm so ready!what's inside
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Your purchase is risk-free with the [timeframe, ie: 7-day] Money Back Guarantee.
I’m so sure you’ll love the [offer name], that I’m offering you a risk-free, money-back guarantee. Decide [offer name]’s not for you for any reason within [timeframe] of purchase, and I’ll return your money.
Ready for [desired future reality]? It’s yours for the taking / claiming.
[Timeframe, ie: 6 months from now, 2 weeks from now] you could be / have [explain in specificity their situation should they choose to NOT take action, and keep on keeping on with the same problems they’ve been experiencing].